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Last week I took a little break for a few days so didn’t post a blog. I had a lovely trip to Berlin where I got to unwind for a bit. But now I am back and talking about writing again.. this week it has been all about the five senses, and how to use them to make your writing richer.
One of the quickest ways to make a story feel vivid is to engage the senses. Writers often focus heavily on what a character can see, but atmosphere becomes much richer when we bring in sound, smell, touch, taste, and texture too. The creak of floorboards in an empty house. The smell of rain on a warm pavement - or that smell you get after the rain. The sting of cold air against skin. These details pull the reader deeper into the scene. The key is specificity. A few carefully chosen sensory details usually work better than long passages of description. One striking image or unexpected smell can create an immediate emotional response. Sensory writing can also reveal character. Two people may walk into the same room and notice entirely different things. One notices perfume and candle smoke; another notices damp walls and stale coffee. What we focus on tells the reader something about who we are, and this is the same for your characters. And atmosphere matters. Sensory details shape mood almost invisibly. Soft fabric, distant music, and warm light create one feeling; flickering bulbs, sharp disinfectant, and echoing footsteps create another entirely. If you weave sensory details naturally into your writing, the reader will stop observing the story from a distance and begin to experience it. Which sense do you find easiest to write, and which do you tend to forget? Let me know in the comments below. And, write a short scene where a character is visiting the house of a new friend and has been asked to wait for them in a room. Post what you come up with. Until next time, happy writing
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Andy Larter
2/6/2026 08:06:11
I think smell & taste are the most overlooked. Touch, sight and soound are well covered but I think aromas and flavours are powerful senses that get kind of forgotten. I walked past a laundry on my way to work when I first started teaching and the smell of the place took me back to the Oxydol aroma of my grandad's. He used Oxydol for washing clothes and dishes. However describing smells is not straightforward is it? I've read descriptions of wine as "leathery." Really? But it's kind of right.
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Debbi
7/6/2026 10:31:47
Just seen this (my settings need looking at - and I don't just mean on my website LOL)... you are right, it can be tricky. Leathery is a new one to me, but everyone smells things differently. I always think jet fuel smells like ice cream...and so when I smell either I think of the other. The secret in writing is to describe it in such a way that the reader knows what you mean. That's all that matters I think. x
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Zannie
5/6/2026 10:59:44
writing visually comes easiest..sense of smell does not get much of a look in
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Debbi
7/6/2026 10:12:22
That's so true... I think so much of descriptive writing tends to be visual, and yet around 50 million people in the world are blind, and I do often wonder how they feel when reading books. But aside from that fact, I think branching out to include the other senses is a good habit and I'm trying to get into it more. Smell and sound are two the most evocative senses - how often have you been transported instantly back to a year in the past on hearing a song, or taken to a particular person when smelling a perfume? :-)
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