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Staying With the Sentence

18/2/2026

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I’m away in Manchester, battling my way through a draft of my novel. It’s something I do regularly thanks to an idea I stole from the great Nancy Stohlman a few years ago – the “mini-retreat” where you lock yourself away in a basic hotel in a boring location, make maximum use of time and all you do is write. I have not taken the advice totally on board. The hotel is basic, but it is far from boring as my room is directly across the street from the beautiful Midland Hotel in Manchester. However, the view really inspires me rather than hinders me, although frequently just to daydream and THINK of beautiful words and grand ideas rather than to actually put them down anywhere.

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While here, I went along to Word Central, a great reading event at the Central Library, and met up with writing buddy Joyce from |Tim. My name had been put on the reserve list to read, but I didn’t really think they would get around to me – but they did! I had to follow some great poets and writers, including the headline act, Zena Barrie, who was hilarious. She read from the book “Two Similar Looking Men with Umbilical Hernias”, a surreal collection of stories and mind meanderings. She delivered her set with easy humour, and it was thoroughly enjoyable. You can buy the book by clicking on its name to take you to the Amazon page. It is only £2.99 on Kindle at the moment.

Today, back in my hotel room writing and reflecting, I ploughed forwards with my novel in progress. I wrote for an hour or so, but then got stuck at a difficult part of the story I am writing, and it is hard to pick up momentum and get through the scene. I started wondering why I was so concerned about this. Is it necessary to rush it? Why can’t I just sit with the words one by one and see what happens when I take my time? Do we always need to be SO productive?

I don’t have the answers to any of that, by the way, and I am wondering, what you do if you find yourself in that position – at a tricky part of your novel/story/whatever? Do you make a placeholder and move on with the intention of picking it up later, or do you stay with the sentences as they slowly draw themselves out? No method is right or wrong, but I am always curious about other people’s practices. Please drop a comment in the chat – about this or any other aspect of your writing.
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Marion Lougheed link
18/2/2026 18:46:19

I've often thought a writing retreat should be in a boring location where there's not much to do except get coffee and/or go for walks! Maybe even with no internet - imagine!

As for staying with the sentence, I find stepping away to ponder usually helps for me, but also plowing through can work. I forget where I read it, but someone said that after you've written the work, you can't even tell the difference between the lines that came easily and the ones that felt excruciating. So even when it feels hard, if you've developed your craft enough, you're generally still doing good work. Slow and steady, and all that. :)

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Debbi Voisey
18/2/2026 19:48:01

That's a really interesting point about not knowing which part agonised you! I guess it is like giving birth (although I am absolutely not an authority on that, never having done it!), but people say you forget the pain and go for another! LOL. Maybe writers are like that. We scream in agony as the words are coming out, but they mingle with the rest of the brood, and we don't know which of our "children" necessitated stitches! Thanks for commenting. x

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Timothy Collyer link
19/2/2026 16:54:38

Lovely location. I used to stay there while running training courses in the 90's, it had (then) beautiful terracotta tiles. I once had a bathroom with a view, lovely wood paneling 30 ft ceiling and a chaise lounge. I wasn't writing back then, but I would have found it very inspirational. A former Railway hotel - all that coming and going - interesting stories.

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Debbi
19/2/2026 17:30:55

It really is a fabulous building and whenever I feel a word blockage, I get up, go and gaze at it, and it usually helps. I also have a photo of it in front of me on my desk. 😁

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